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Tips For Teens II

by Seahorse 

Posted: 18 February 2004
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Smoking's neither big nor clever
(It might impress the girls however)

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The Walrus at 20:53 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
Succint. Agree with the sentiment, but the flip side is, it is rather lovely and rather naughty. As for impressing the girls, well, taste of stale tobacco is not exactly an aphrodisiac.

Like your style.

The Walrus

roovacrag at 20:56 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
I s this it?........ would have liked a bit more,as in black lungs,coughing,etc might as well go the whole hog darling. finish up with the coffin.

Fearless at 20:59 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
It's bleedin' hilarious when, after rolling your own, you try to light it off the gas stove and set your perm alight.


Elsie at 21:12 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
I think you could make something really fun out of a series of these. Keep at it..

igbit33 at 21:16 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
Thanks Seahorse, gave me a good giggle

igbit. xx
(Oh fearless, a perm?!)

Chem at 21:19 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
Me too. Sitting here laughing out loud...
Keep them coming!

Maybe it's a fearless perm?! Mine was when I was 12!


Fearless at 21:26 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
I'm a bald bastardo

igbit33 at 21:29 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
Damn that's funny, f.


I think perhaps frightful, Em.


This is all your falt Seahorse. Leave us with sharp wit on a Wednesday evening, and look what happens!

Seahorse at 08:56 on 19 February 2004  Report this post
Thank you for all your comments.

Two downsides are that:

(a) all your messages have left my "comments sent/received" graphic looking hopelessly lopsided, so please post some stuff of your own ASAP to help me avoid looking so selfish! and

(b) the girls gave up long before the fags did; and

tinyclanger at 09:18 on 19 February 2004  Report this post
Ah, the days when we thought smoking was cool..I remember them well, (cough)

Fearless with a perm..nice image..

Keep 'em coming Seahorse, great stuff.

EmiliaDG at 17:53 on 22 February 2004  Report this post
I love these two liners of yours Seahorse and I agree, you should write a whole series! More please?

Anj at 11:58 on 05 May 2004  Report this post

Can only echo the comments of those above - although I thought "Smoking isn't big or clever" would have flowed more easily (sorry to nitpick).


Steerpike`s sister at 13:33 on 01 July 2006  Report this post
Found this as a random read!
I would rephrase the last line:

It might impress the boys however

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