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Ron`s challenge 390

by Mickey 

Posted: 05 September 2017
Word Count: 56
Summary: A couple of entries for Ron's one-liner challenge


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Ipso Facto
 
Is an Orange
called an ‘Orange’
because it’s orange?
OR
Is orange
called ‘orange’
because it’s orange
like an Orange?
 
 
 
 
The Egg-Timer

 
         Oh
       I wish
     I was an
    egg-timer
     cos that
      would
       make
         me
          s
          m
           i
           l
           e
         for
       while
       I was
    standing
    upon my
   head, you
    could run
     the four
      minute
        mile






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Mickey at 08:22 on 05 September 2017  Report this post
There we are Ron.  I thought the first more like the poems on RHP, but the second looks much better properly centred (which we can't do here on WW)  Hope you like them?

Mike

ronaldanne at 12:22 on 05 September 2017  Report this post
Mike, they are a couple of beauties.

~Ron

joanie at 18:02 on 05 September 2017  Report this post
Excellent! I am loving the shape poems, Mike. This one is fantastic! Joanie

tusker at 12:52 on 08 September 2017  Report this post
Great! Loved both of them. They certainly made me smile.

Jennifer

Bazz at 14:30 on 09 September 2017  Report this post
Love the hour glass poem Mike, clever form and writing :)

Cliff Hanger at 15:40 on 09 September 2017  Report this post
Perfect for the prompt. 

Lovely inventive writing.

Jane


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