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threw me away

by BorderBound 

Posted: 09 February 2004
Word Count: 176
Summary: didnt take long to write, needs a bit of work, one of those 'grr' poems, that u write at 3am - and never really want to look at it again


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Dancing girl spinning
Round the back streets
She claims life
Dancing girl screaming
From all the love she’s sharing
Now she claims back every dime that they spent.

Take it back
Take it all back
Take it back take it all back
Take it all
And throw it all away.

Suck harder suck harder
Anything for a fiver
Put your gun in my mouth and shoot.
Suck harder suck harder
When did I become a dancer?
A dancing girl
Spinning
Whole lot of world
Thought I was winning
Once upon a time…

Dancing girl
Spinning
Whole lot of world
She plans on winning.
One day she’ll be more then just a catch.

Take it back
Take it all back
Take it back take it all back
Take it all
And throw it all away.

He’s the gun in my mouth
And he shoots me.
He’s the gun in my mouth
Says he loves me

Take it back
Take it all back
Take it back take it all back
Take it all
And throw it all away.






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igbit33 at 18:23 on 10 February 2004  Report this post
This is, as you say an angry poem and a harsh one to read (meant complimentarily). I particularly liked the rhythm. I sometimes wonder, in the same way singers have a natural key, if we may all have a rhythm that is ours - In our make up - that draws us to the same when we see it. If that makes any sense.

BorderBound at 09:11 on 13 February 2004  Report this post
i think we all have an inner rhythm, unfortunatly some dont use it, :(
and most goes unnoticed!



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