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Why is this age worse than earlier ages?

by James Graham 

Posted: 11 March 2015
Word Count: 118
Summary: For this week's challenge. Title and first line from Anna Akhmatova - see forum thread.


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Why is this age worse than earlier ages?

Why is this age worse than earlier ages?
- Not as you meant it, Anna. In your
Leningrad, people looked askance. Fear
gusted along the queues. Then a great
malevolence came from the west, a grand
circus of cruelty and waste. But Europe
seems weary now of these murderous men
and the blood-orgies you lived through.

Would you have thought this a happier time?
Perhaps, at first. But soon you would see,
by night in the doorways of St Petersburg,
lost children, some of the thirty thousand.
And understand that our great men
are master-thieves who do not stage
bloody performances, but circumspectly
pillage the world’s wealth, while children weep.






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V`yonne at 10:40 on 15 March 2015  Report this post

Then a great
malevolence came from the west, a grand
circus of cruelty and waste.

are master-thieves who do not stage
bloody performances, but circumspectly
pillage the world’s wealth, while children weep.

Nailed it James!!!

FelixBenson at 10:59 on 15 March 2015  Report this post
Dear James

I greatly enjoyed this piece of poetry analysis (is it blank verse?). Taking Akmatova's question as a jumping off point you compare the times, Leningrad in Akmatova's time, and now, under Putin. As the final lines point out Akmativa might have seen little of change in times, really. Just the same theft and misery, but perhaps fewer 'blood-orgies' out in the open for all to see. Sad but true. I enjoyed the internal rhymes and assonance exchoing through the first stanza.

worse / askance / gusted / malevolence / west / circus / waste/ muderous

The assonance is lighter and more subtle in the final stanza as the poem reaches its conclusion. There is a sense that in any age we're so horrified by our times, that we cannot believe that it can possible get any worse - something that unites us across the times, in some awful way. The methods might change, but the potential for cruelty is unabated.

I found Anna Akmatova while exploring international women poets, and I enjoyed her writing. She's someone I will read more of I think, so thanks for the link.

Bazz at 13:57 on 15 March 2015  Report this post
Very contemplative James, I felt a real connection to the poet and her themes (i read some of her work, very interesting), the second stanza carries so much feeling, it's really striking.

James Graham at 21:28 on 15 March 2015  Report this post
Thanks for all comments. Kirsty -
 

I enjoyed the internal rhymes and assonance


I have to come clean on this. When you pointed these out, it was the first time I had noticed them! I wasn't aware of them as I was writing. But they're there! Accidental assonance.

James.


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