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Until Perhaps

by BorderBound 

Posted: 27 January 2004
Word Count: 142
Summary: a quickie


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She writes another poem
And sticks it on her door
But still no one will notice her
Any less or any more.

And on the walls her paintings
Of naked screaming women,
And still they walk in
Simply open the curtains.

She’ll paint her fingertips black
Watch her lips follow
And then in the dark
All that can be seen is her sorrow.

(But no one’s there to see)

She’ll write another chapter
About where her life went wrong
“Nothing will ever come out of this,
Get a job, stop writing songs”

And then one day perhaps they’ll read
The poems that she writes
Perhaps they’ll see those screaming girls
And her black lips in the night

Perhaps one day as she sleeps
Dreaming about where she went wrong
They’ll put on the radio and hear her sing
“What a beautiful song…”






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roovacrag at 20:34 on 27 January 2004  Report this post
Thought at some point you was talking about me.hehe I write poems,paint landscapes and even done clay. I liked it. poems are great if you can see something in yourself....thats why we write. Good one xxxxx Alice

Bobo at 22:19 on 27 January 2004  Report this post
Gal - I liked the tone of this - unrecognised talent; overlooked until perhaps too late. Sad, frustrating. Well-written.

BoBo x

nudgy at 10:34 on 21 June 2004  Report this post
I liked this.I liked the sentiments behind the work and the structure of the poem, and it rhymed, which I think is a cleverer way of writing poetry than simply talking in lines.Good stuff!(Are you a lost soul?)

BorderBound at 18:53 on 07 May 2005  Report this post
err a year later, almost - but i can honestly say nudgy! that I am not a lost soul, anymore.


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