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ONE CALL AWAY

by roovacrag

Posted: 21 January 2004
Word Count: 67

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Where is my 13th spirit of Rah.
Is he near or is he far.
I wonder often of my star
strength of the Leo.

We fight for what we believe in
we are true to all our friends.
I feel the older version
of one more strong than i.

The miles do part us
we think each others thoughts
Yes,we have the affinity.
A trust,A faith,A call.

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Bobo at 13:50 on 21 January 2004 Report this post

Beautiful Alice - to have such affinity for another is so rare and you've worded this so eloquently so as to do it justice. Miles are irrelevant.

BoBo x

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Fearless at 18:13 on 21 January 2004 Report this post

Thanks Al. The lyric reminds me that while distance can be a barrier, affinity transcends all. Thanks for the reminder.

Sorry I bit your head off. Give the superglue a chance.

fearless

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Marcus1 at 11:14 on 24 January 2004 Report this post

Hi Alice,

What do you mean by?

I feel the older version
of one more strong than i.

Are you suggesting you are weaker now? If this is so, how can you feel like an older version who is stronger?

xx
Marcus

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Tuppence at 18:26 on 04 February 2005 Report this post

the sting in the tail
is fearsome to some
so bad dreams come
and go
until we know the nightmares will go
scorpio

nice one x

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