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Devon

by Prabz 

Posted: 23 September 2013
Word Count: 56
Summary: Arriving at our new home for one summer, in Dartmoor.


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Devon

Suddenly the whole world
Changes
Like dappled rays
Of Devon sunlight
Resting their warm transience
In a new room
With oak beams
At a long journey’s end

Stirred memories, alive
Rolling through the barn door
Whispered, from upon the moor
Dispersing, inhaled
In a new fate
Reincarnate
I remember what this is
To slow down






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Wendy Mason at 17:08 on 03 October 2013  Report this post
I'm not usually a poem person but I loved this one.
I really like the description of the sun rays being transient, not a word I would naturally of thought of but it is so fitting.
I also like how the second verse slows down to the last line 'to slow down'. Very clever. Well done.


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