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by roovacrag 

Posted: 19 January 2004
Word Count: 54

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You stir up my feelings
Iknow I am strong.
I want to know
why i am wrong.

I am a toy that explodes,
not one to play with.
not one to chicken out
I am me.

I am not a jigsaw
a piece that misfits
I am me
Don't you see,
I am me.

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Bobo at 13:30 on 20 January 2004  Report this post
Alice - a firmly adamant piece - nicely unwavering sentiment.

BoBo x

The Walrus at 14:00 on 20 January 2004  Report this post
Agree with Bobo, firmly adamant. Also reminded me of a couple of Fearless': 'Jigsaw Piece' and 'Accept Me'.

The Walrus

roovacrag at 14:44 on 20 January 2004  Report this post
Never thought of that when i wrote it. woz and i do have the same brain at times so not surprising we write about the same things.x Alice

Fearless at 10:33 on 21 January 2004  Report this post
Liked it.

'I am a toy that explodes' - boom!


Poetic at 12:14 on 21 January 2004  Report this post
I very much identify with this piece. Felt like I was reading my thoughts. Enjoyed it. Very insightful.

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