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Baptism By Fire

by The Walrus 

Posted: 19 January 2004
Word Count: 79
Summary: I appear to be embarking on a rather scarey phase of 'Horror Poetry'. This poem is dedicated to Mr McNay.


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You hear the voice
screaming for clemency,
not realising it is
your own.

You see the ego parading
its vainglorious plumage,
unready to renounce
its deceptive deadly habit.

You smell the fear,
its festering miasma,
unwilling to exorcise
its virulent existence.

But,
it is not,
until you feel
the flames lick,
not until you smell
the acridity of your own
burning flesh,
that then, and, only then
will you kneel in homage,
in gratitude, to witness
your phoenix rise.






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Bobo at 09:23 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Walrus - simultaneously gruesome and optimistic. I could almost smell the burning flesh, but then was rescued by the hope offered by the pheonix. A turbulent, and enjoyable, read!

BoBo x

The Walrus at 09:26 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Yeah, I think you're right it is both gruesome and optimistic... thank god for the phoenix!

Thanks Bobo.

The Walrus
x

roovacrag at 13:36 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Beautiful,very well written.Loved the burning flesh, and the phoenix. Enjoyed it when i heard it and now i see it written downcan reread it over again. x Alice

The Walrus at 14:15 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Thanks Alice.

The Walrus
x

Fearless at 16:50 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Nicely gruesome....maybe you could write one dedicated to the director Dario Argento, about blood lust....'profondo rosso'

fearless

The Walrus at 17:34 on 19 January 2004  Report this post
Thanks for your comment Fearless. I am awed by your art house movie knowledge, but being a complete neanderthal, your reference is completely lost on me.

The Walrus

dr_mandrill at 02:45 on 20 January 2004  Report this post
*wipes the blood off his face*

Liked this- sometimes you need to be hacked to pieces with a rusty machete, so you can pull yourself together again and face the world.

dm

sorry i had the phoenix shot! should get better with some tlc and paraffin.

The Walrus at 09:09 on 20 January 2004  Report this post
Quite. Hacking can be gruesomely cathartic (although personally I prefer my machete sterilised).

Yeah, and next time, leave the phoenix alone you big bully.

The Walrus





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