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Island of miserable love

by Bobo 

Posted: 08 January 2004
Word Count: 82


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Obsolete currency of jibes and mock-flirtation -
not the stuff of rich, mature, or grounded conversation.
I understand your stance,
know the dagger in your side,
yet this must end -
you must move forward
and quell the restless tide.

I have sailed away on seas more tranquil, warm and calming -
left behind the body blows, so viciously alarming.
I understood your fear,
knew the axe above your head -
that's why I walked,
found my way
to truer love instead.







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olebut at 19:08 on 08 January 2004  Report this post
Lisa

once again you seem to have hit the spot with a very literal and evocative poem I like the phrasiology and the images it portrays

take care

david

Fearless at 19:36 on 08 January 2004  Report this post
Beautiful.

fearless

roovacrag at 20:53 on 08 January 2004  Report this post
Never miserable love, just one that went haywire. Always one there,takes time but worth waiting for. xxxxxxx Alice

The Walrus at 21:20 on 08 January 2004  Report this post
To sail, away... a brave, but worthy move.

The Walrus
x

Bobo at 22:48 on 08 January 2004  Report this post
David/Woz/Al/Chris - thanks for your comments. Never that easy to move away from a love, however much that love involved suffering.

BoBo x

poemsgalore at 18:36 on 09 January 2004  Report this post
Can't add anything to what the others have said, excellent as always Bobo

Elsie at 21:55 on 09 January 2004  Report this post
HI Bobo
Love the obsolete currency..
I read this whilst listening to Moby's "Give me loving' - think it's called, probably not!) the words went so well with that rhythm. I love the line "I understand your fear". To me, having heard it like that, it would sit very well spoken over music.
Elsie


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