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Passion revisited

by roovacrag 

Posted: 05 January 2004
Word Count: 192

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Heard from afar
why did you intrude
into my life?
I didn't want you
More trouble than strife.

Too old for you
that's for sure
nothing perfect
nothing clear.

Why did i feel
i wanted you near
oh so near?
i wanted you.
Wanted you to stroke
my inner thigh,
not sure
know not why.
Suckle my breast
hold me close
kiss my lips
not sure which
you choose -
erotic exposure
love all around
gasps and conclusions
just a sound
my fantasy world
free from sin.

Wrapped all around you
harder inside.
love making easy
this is my pride.

Breasts heavy
heaving at least.
top of you now
my feast

Close my lips tight
drawing you in
my world of love
just give in.
Now forget the age gap,
do as you will.
Thrust even deeper
in for the kill.

Holding tight
never let go
seed just spewing
to my womb untold.

slaked in sweat,
we come down to earth.
suckle my breast
for all you're worth.

Hold you near,
give it an hour.
You will appear
hard as a rock.
Plummet you will,
climax,oh yes,
go forever
A pleasure untold.

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Comments by other Members

Bobo at 18:24 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
Wow! Alice - what a torrent of wanting! This is so very intense, I don't think I inhaled throughout the entire piece! A real roller-coaster of lust.

BoBo x

Fearless at 18:35 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
Whisky Al

One can smell the musk, the desire, lust and passion in this hot piece. It has something of a rhythm about it, much like the act of passion itself. Ooooh, you dirty woman! It's a good piece; write on.


poemsgalore at 18:43 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
phew! Think I'd better go and take a cold shower - Alice, this is beautiful.

The Walrus at 19:17 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
Blimey! Can't really add to the comments, apart from, Wow!

The Walrus

roovacrag at 20:24 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
It's not that bad,is it? A one off, my daughter in law never said a word.
I shall have to cut down on proof reading.
giving me ideas

Hope i don't offend as its not what i wanted.
Thank you for you comments.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx alice joy

The Walrus at 16:30 on 06 January 2004  Report this post
No offense taken Alice, at least not on my part. I think it is a wonderfully honest and passionate piece.

The Walrus

Chem at 23:29 on 22 September 2004  Report this post

I wasn't a member of WriteWords when you posted this piece but I have been going back over some old postings and saw it! I absolutely love it and I'm very glad that you shared such a passionate poem! It took my breath away. It may be way overdue, but I just wanted to let you know.


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