Now Is The Time
Posted: 01 January 2004 Word Count: 107
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Now is the time For stillness, To go within To reacquaint With the cells That connect To stop The mind’s chatter To submerge into silence. To reflect.
Now is the time To look around To hear To see To feel The mind-blowing beauty A world, a state, a place In which to heal.
Now is the time To abandon regret Self-doubt And hatred To expose them, Dissolve them, Destroy them In the catalytic light.
Now is the time To let go of fear The dark destroyer And while he rests His cold blade Upon your neck, Now is the time To turn your Sweat-shimmering face And smile.
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Fearless at 21:16 on 01 January 2004
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Walrus
It comes across as a calm piece, but is actually an anthem to rising up, reflecting, healing, to dispel, smile and be all that you can be - happy, in mind and body. A good piece that broadens your range of lyric and subject matter. I like this rather a lot. Write on sister.
Fearless
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Bobo at 21:33 on 01 January 2004
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Walrus - love this - it's got a fantastic understated strength. Standing still, reflecting, taking the time to reassess, shaking off fears - this is true strength, eloquently expressed. Fab.
BoBo x
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The Walrus at 21:53 on 01 January 2004
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Fearless/Bobo, I thank you. I like to think of it as a quietly feisty piece, a moment to take a deep breath before going back, once again, into the breach...
The Walrus
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roovacrag at 12:23 on 02 January 2004
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Beautiful,well written.Wish i had the grasp on words you do. xxxxAlice
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miffle at 11:39 on 06 January 2004
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Like the image of the 'cold blade resting on the neck' very much. Also like the shape that the repetition of 'Now is the time' gives to the poem. 'Sweat' an interesting word in the penultimate line - is that what you meant?
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The Walrus at 16:36 on 06 January 2004
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Thanks Nicola. 'Sweat' was intended, yes, was trying to convey a person experiencing fear. Perhaps this doesn't come across so well.
Thanks again, oh and welcome to WW.
The Walrus
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