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Hard and Fast

by The Walrus 

Posted: 23 December 2003
Word Count: 91


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Too fast?
Too hard?
You ask.
Risking burn out?
Falling off the edge?
You question.

Yes, my friend
Sure, it’s led
At break neck,
Hitching lifts
On passing comets
Rudely flouting
Normal,
Decent limits.
And, yes, ever
Burning bright,
Too bright.

But even if there was
The know how
To live another
More sedate way,
I doubt it would be taken,
And, perhaps for this
There will be
A price to pay.

But longevity
Lacks lustre,
Moderation
Breeds monotony.
And, god forbid
I suffer the
Ignominious fate
Of death
By mediocrity.






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Tina at 16:52 on 23 December 2003  Report this post
What is this life if full of care
We take no time to stand and stare!

Great poem and not mediocre!
Thanks for sharing
Tina
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The Walrus at 17:03 on 23 December 2003  Report this post
Thanks for your comments Tina.

The Walrus
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Bobo at 08:52 on 24 December 2003  Report this post
Walrus - how true - the hum-drum is not a way to live, but a way to die a little bit each day. A defiant piece.

BoBo x

PS Be careful. Burnout has its own tedium!

The Walrus at 12:59 on 24 December 2003  Report this post
Bobo

Thanks, burnout is not clever, don't intend to pop off quite yet.

Thanks for all your encouraging comments on my poems.

Hope you enjoy the festivities!

The Walrus
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