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Heaven

by ChrisB 

Posted: 21 December 2003
Word Count: 251
Summary: It was a good day and an even better moment


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Sometimes, just sometimes I feel I am in heaven
And my mind is just opening up to the truth and reality of life itself.
The dark cloud of uncertainty, of doubt and the tight rope of fear we walk passes away
My whole perception is one of lightness.

With that the realisation comes the immensity of what life is,
In all its colours, shapes, forms, sounds, patterns, feeling, thoughts, and incredible delicate emotions
It overwhelms me for an instance,
And my heart fills up with so much love

So much, I want to strip naked and run down the street, jumping and dancing and shouting for joy,
Shaking strangers and wanting to share with them how much love there is to go around
In abundance and there is no need to worry, we are all saved,
We are all powerful, all eternal, all beautiful human beings.

Of course, I hold my self back from that thought,
Afraid that I would find myself locked up in a the local mental asylum, Wrapped up in a straight jacket
Rocking back and fourth which makes me laugh.

And maybe that is the point,
That is the game we play.
Not wanting to give too much away,
So I stand back

Let it all go,
And let a gentle breeze of loving grace pass through me and touch my delicate skin.
I feel alive
I feel so alive, that I smile and know that I am beginning to see life in all its infinite dimensions.







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Ellenna at 20:28 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
This is a joyous piece of writing! I too have known that feeling.. oh what am I saying.. I still feel it at times lol:)

(oh back and forth btw)

nice poem...

Ellie :)

The Walrus at 12:31 on 22 December 2003  Report this post
Utterly fabulous.

You can feel the power, love and sense of oneness exploding through this piece, and, I firmly feel its content is a reality for those who dare.

Brilliant. Please write more.

The Walrus

Fearless at 19:02 on 22 December 2003  Report this post
Spiritually sweet; write on

fearless

roovacrag at 13:23 on 24 December 2003  Report this post
Never give too much of yourself.
Life is wonderful, take each day at a time and enjoy what is thrown at you. Well written.

ChrisB at 21:31 on 24 December 2003  Report this post
Thanks to you all for your kind words ! First poem posted so a little anxious. Bit like being a virgin all over again, scary ! So you've done me a favour in relieving that. I look forward to reading and contributing to all your work in the new year.
Merry Christmas
C


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