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Don`t taunt me

by roovacrag 

Posted: 21 December 2003
Word Count: 48
Summary: Adream of the only love i had.
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If you care,
don't taunt me,
touch me,
want me.

Even as an object,
a being,
a thing,
a love.

Don't mind you holding me,
caressing me,
touching my breast.
Touch if you want.

If you don't care
or love me.
Don't do it,
cos i do care.






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Fearless at 19:44 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
Makes sense if you're a person. But what if you were considered to be a plaything? You know, leave them there for when I return?

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Bobo at 22:39 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
Al - this is a heartfelt piece - a cry for mercy, almost. When the heart is engaged we are easy prey - those who do not recipricate our feelings should rise above the opportunity to exploit...tho often that isn't the case. Great stuff.

BoBo x
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