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My Christmas List

by Bobo 

Posted: 21 December 2003
Word Count: 61

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What should you get me,
I wonder?
What will make me smile,
bring life to my eyes,
a sparkle of joy?
Diamond facets with icicle beauty?
Tactile pashmina of finest brushed silk?
Which of these
will rescusitate your Love?

Just get me,
that's all I ask.
Take the time to notice
my reality.
I need nothing but your understanding.
And love.

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poemsgalore at 12:29 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
The present means nothing if the heart isn't behind it. Very well expressed, and written. A poem to keep coming back to.

Ellenna at 13:11 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
Lovely poem about wanting warmth..
"diamond facets with icicle beauty"
hmm ..
hope your Christmas wishes come true!

Fearless at 13:14 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
The Christmas gift that keeps on giving for all eternity, for both you and he. I hope your Christmas wish, Yuletide prayer is heard and granted sweet sister BoBo.


olebut at 15:40 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
nice words Bobo but giving is the gift isn't it

take care


Bobo at 22:35 on 21 December 2003  Report this post
David/Fearless/Ellie/Kath - thanks so much for your comments. Often I think that the gifts given are a substitute for what people really truly need from those close to them. Time, understanding, open arms - these are worth so much more. Diamond earrings are very pretty but don't mean that I feel loved, needed, wanted...

BoBo. x

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