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Le Midi

by Desormais 

Posted: 29 September 2010
Word Count: 11
Summary: As we approach the end of autumn cruising, this is a memory that will lighten the winter for me. (For Jennifer's Haiku Challenge)
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golden plane trees form
a colonnade of splendour
autumn closes in






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tusker at 14:36 on 29 September 2010  Report this post
That's lovely Sandra.

I can see that arch of trees.

Good first try at Haiku.

Jennifer
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Findy at 15:49 on 29 September 2010  Report this post
Lovely image Sandra. Great response.

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joanie at 16:03 on 29 September 2010  Report this post
Beautiful, Sandra. The image is very clear; trees forming a colonnade is an excellent idea!

joanie
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jenzarina at 18:03 on 30 September 2010  Report this post
A wonderful, sweeping image in so few words.
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Desormais at 19:39 on 30 September 2010  Report this post
Thanks everyone for the encouragement. I'm not quite sure what I'm doing yet but I'll get the hang of it soon.
Sandra
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Cornelia at 13:10 on 02 October 2010  Report this post
Nice haiku with lots of atmosphere in so few words. Well done!

Sheila
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Desormais at 15:03 on 02 October 2010  Report this post
Thanks Sheila.
Sandra
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Nella at 17:28 on 03 October 2010  Report this post
Lovely image!
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Desormais at 19:36 on 03 October 2010  Report this post
Thanks Nella.
Sandra
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