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Not Love, Actually

by Bobo 

Posted: 03 December 2003
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Undeniable
electricity surge -
watershed eruption
of molten hunger.
Unstoppable.
Unrelenting.
Uncompromising
is the need
to devour the sweet flesh.
The loins dictate.
My heart absconds.






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Tim Darwin at 14:13 on 03 December 2003  Report this post
This is visceral, loin-gripping stuff--very powerful, well done! (this is as a reader, I am no poet). I did hesitate over dictate, don't know if something else might work better there or not. But that is by the by; the erotic punch certainly connects; wonderful!

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Fearless at 16:58 on 03 December 2003  Report this post
BoBo

Good piece, how many of us are honest enough, I wonder, to realise the difference, to appreciate both, and ride the wave?

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roovacrag at 05:17 on 09 December 2003  Report this post
Great one. Not sure if the heart rules the head and the head rules the loins. So long as we never regret.Well written. xx alice
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