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Rake To The Face

by Sparrow_splitter 

Posted: 02 December 2003
Word Count: 64
Summary: I think I should concentrate more in interviews.
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I killed a man once,
stabbed him with a rake

Looked at me funny he did,
so I gave it to him
right in the face.

Sorry sir,
but that does'nt qualify you
for the job.
Why don't you try
another bank?

Wasn't really a man,
more a collection of leaves

Wasn't really a rake,
more of a spade.

Sorry what were you saying?






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Bobo at 09:37 on 03 December 2003  Report this post
Sparrow - this is sublimely surreal! ;0)

BoBo x
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Sparrow_splitter at 16:35 on 03 December 2003  Report this post
Why thank you BoBo.
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dr_mandrill at 18:30 on 03 December 2003  Report this post
ahahahaha this is white hot genius!
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Sparrow_splitter at 16:09 on 04 December 2003  Report this post
Thanks dm.
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roovacrag at 14:13 on 06 December 2003  Report this post
might try it on my finacial adviser. Think a lot will read this and say YES . xx Alice
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