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The National Memorial in Prague
Posted: 18 August 2010 Word Count: 183
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The National Memorial in Prague
They have a worker with a hod of bricks erected here instead of God.
He seems resolved to be a worker or be damned.
With visionary gaze like Paul on the Damascus road, he contemplates
a tenth-floor wall where he will lay his bricks and consecrate another worker’s flat.
It is a humanist cathedral. Stained glass commemorates
large peasant women; assorted Party men in bronze complete
a kind of trinity. The eye is drawn to the mausoleums of the saints:
the heroes of the anti-fascist war, the great black tomb of Klement Gottwald,
inscribed in gold. This high conceit, this godless Vatican, this hymn
to Lenin with its red flags flaming on the marble stair, presumes to deal
with death as Christians do, whose real concern and province it has always been.
For since the Nazarene negated death, they have enshrined
it sacredly, refined their special forms of homage, and become
the best authorities. They do not state in stone its plain finality.
These builders, as if not quite sure, still made a kind of church.
Prague 1964
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James Graham at 21:30 on 18 August 2010
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As it says at the foot of the poem, I wrote this in 1964! My wife and I, adventurous at that time to the point of recklessness, decided to go on holiday behind the Iron Curtain. We made friends with the Czech tour guide, returned the following year to stay a month with her in Prague, and are still in touch with her to this day.
Obviously as visitors we didn’t see the down side of life in a Communist country, but the places we visited seemed prosperous enough, and the Czech people we met seemed quite positive about their society and active in the community. But Czechoslovakia was never anything like, say, Ceausescu’s Romania, or North Korea today. And I suppose the new order was at least preferable to the years of Nazi occupation.
I hope this poem won’t seem too remote in time and place - a museum piece. I’ve been rummaging in my personal archive and coming across this I thought it might still be presentable.
Klement Gottwald was the first Communist President (from 1948 until his death, from syphilis and alcoholism, in 1953).
James.
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woodsville at 19:32 on 19 August 2010
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Hi James
I've read this through a few times and feel it is about a clash of ideologies and if that's so why the need for description.
I feel that you make it too easy - I understand that it is a point your trying to get across that reason/rituals alienates us from emotion in the end whether it be christian or aethist.
I have a problem with stanza 2 and the last stanza - either he has been sucked in by the ideology or he remains beyond its grasp.
Patrick
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James Graham at 20:08 on 20 August 2010
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Patrick, thanks for your comment. Why the description? When I look again I realise that much of the description isn't relevant to the subject of death and memorials, which doesn't get going until after the poem's half-way mark. I suppose at the time - though not caught up in either Communist or Christian ideology/ belief - I couldn't help being impressed by the memorial. But it was curious how very like a church it seemed, and that's more or less what the poem is saying. I wasn't aware of trying to make a point about reason/ ritual and emotion.
When you post a poem you begin to re-assess it in a way you wouldn't if it was just lying around. I'm fairly sure that this is a museum piece at best. Unless someone else thinks different?
James.
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joanie at 19:02 on 25 August 2010
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Hello James. I'm slowly getting back into the swing of things! I really did enjoy reading this and my first thoughts are that I would like to see the memorial. My neighbour is Czech; in fact, he is in Prague at the moment, visiting his mother.
I totally understood the opening lines; I loved the Communist/God comparison, which led me on to want more. It is a humanist cathedral.
Stained glass commemorates
large peasant women; assorted
Party men in bronze complete
a kind of trinity. |
| Wonderful! I find it fascinating. this godless Vatican, this hymn
to Lenin |
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Oh, sorry..... I shall be quoting every bit of it! I find your links excellent.
Not at all!
I love it.
joanie
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V`yonne at 20:56 on 25 August 2010
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James, wonderful! I didn't find a thing I didn't like or understand and this
This high conceit,
this godless Vatican, this hymn
to Lenin with its red flags flaming
on the marble stair, presumes to deal
with death as Christians do, |
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is brilliant. Well I think so...
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clyroroberts at 20:53 on 26 August 2010
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I like it. I don't think it reads like a museum piece at all.
Maybe its worth developing the idols idea into modern neo-liberal capitalism and the shrines to money that have been created on a much bigger and more extravagant scale since the velvet revolution. Our monuments seem even more cold and lifeless than the communists'.
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