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Behind Blue Eyes

by Ling Ling 

Posted: 30 November 2003
Word Count: 76

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Dignity has no heart,
but conceals the hurt & pain
you hide so well.

The picture adorned of -
many colours to blend away
the ripples of broken canvass.

A pretty mask to hide
the ugliness of Solitude,
the empty space inside.

And so, you wear it well,
but never forget I know
what lies behind blue eyes.

So self assured those eyes -
so proud, with winning smile,
love is missing, missing by a mile.

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roovacrag at 21:14 on 30 November 2003  Report this post
Beautifully written. Keep it up. xx alice

Bobo at 10:25 on 01 December 2003  Report this post
Ling Ling - this is so beautifully expressed - it conveys a deep knowing fondness of its subject and such warmth.

BoBo x

Fearless at 13:56 on 02 December 2003  Report this post
A fine, moving piece.

teck at 08:22 on 16 September 2006  Report this post
Normally don't read poetry but by chance the 'Random Read' allowed me th epleasure of your beautiful work, very nice.

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