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The Fly

by Laurence 

Posted: 29 June 2010
Word Count: 150
Summary: Week 210 Challenge


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A blue-bottle buzzed lazily around the dusty room occasionally landing on piles of manuscripts once thumbed by eager scholars. Professor Charles Mitchell sat staring into space. He had been working on Anglo Saxon riddles. He was exhausted and needed a break but the paper needed to be delivered the day after tomorrow.

He reached behind him and removed a red leathered book concealing a small bottle of whisky. Unscrewing the top he drank the contents. He belched, wiped his mouth with the back of his hand and continued ruminating on his theory.

Suddenly it came to him. Looking again at the Anglo Saxon script it all made sense to him. ‘Yes! The treasure!’ he shouted out. A pain gripped his chest and he slumped over his work. The fly circled over him once or twice and then hit the window several times in an attempt to escape the tragic scene.






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GaiusCoffey at 09:36 on 29 June 2010  Report this post
An uplifting and inspirational tale of a man achieving his lifelong ambition in time for death. The fly is a nice touch.
G

tusker at 18:27 on 29 June 2010  Report this post
Like this, Laurence.

Very visual. Poor man finding what he sought too late.

Jennifer

Laurence at 19:57 on 29 June 2010  Report this post
Thanks Gaius and Jennifer for your comments.

Laurence

Prospero at 18:31 on 30 June 2010  Report this post
I enjoyed this, Laurence. One does wonder though, at the futility of some Scholarly effort.

Best

John

Laurence at 19:10 on 30 June 2010  Report this post
I have to confess that I spent sometime in dusty academia sifting through ancient manuscripts. I really enjoyed it but knew it could last because I need to earn a little more money!

Laurence

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sorry! could not last!

Findy at 18:05 on 03 July 2010  Report this post
Poor man, Professor Charles Mitchell, I mean

Very atmospheric, enjoyed this Laurence.

Findy



Laurence at 18:29 on 03 July 2010  Report this post
Thanks for your comments Findy. A pity the professor could not reap the fruits of his break through!!!

Laurence

crowspark at 11:09 on 11 July 2010  Report this post
Wonderfully comic, particularly with the antics of the fly. Highly enjoyable black humour.

Thanks for the read.

Bill

jenzarina at 14:57 on 11 July 2010  Report this post
I oved the touch of the fly. Poor man! At least he'd cracked it just before...


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