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Your Gone

by Ling Ling 

Posted: 22 November 2003
Word Count: 32
Summary: Its out of our hands....
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Cool Reflection
Good intentions
Lovely words
Too many to mention
Love is lost - beyond redemption

Heart so bruised
Feel confused
You asked me to wait
Now its too late
You're gone.....






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poemsgalore at 13:12 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Very short, sweet and enjoyable to read. Only one point, title should be "you're gone" and not "your gone". Sorry to be pedantic.
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Ling Ling at 15:32 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Thanks Poemsgalore, all ammended now. Glad you liked it. Ling Ling x
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roovacrag at 20:06 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Short and to the point.Hope it has not gone, but will come back. xx al
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Ling Ling at 21:24 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Thanks Alice, he may have gone, but maybe someone more worthy will bring the feeling back, here's hoping....
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paul53 [for I am he] at 13:27 on 02 March 2005  Report this post
Brief and poignant. Enjoyed this immensely.
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