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Your Gone

by Ling Ling 

Posted: 22 November 2003
Word Count: 32
Summary: Its out of our hands....

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Cool Reflection
Good intentions
Lovely words
Too many to mention
Love is lost - beyond redemption

Heart so bruised
Feel confused
You asked me to wait
Now its too late
You're gone.....

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poemsgalore at 13:12 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Very short, sweet and enjoyable to read. Only one point, title should be "you're gone" and not "your gone". Sorry to be pedantic.

Ling Ling at 15:32 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Thanks Poemsgalore, all ammended now. Glad you liked it. Ling Ling x

roovacrag at 20:06 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Short and to the point.Hope it has not gone, but will come back. xx al

Ling Ling at 21:24 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Thanks Alice, he may have gone, but maybe someone more worthy will bring the feeling back, here's hoping....

paul53 [for I am he] at 13:27 on 02 March 2005  Report this post
Brief and poignant. Enjoyed this immensely.

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