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Forever Love

by Ling Ling 

Posted: 20 November 2003
Word Count: 82
Summary: For the man who waits for me, who drives me on to believe in love.


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Speechless I look into your eyes,
Standing toe to toe we are closer -
than we have ever been before.

With just the air between us two,
A gentle separateness is created -
though together we are one.

Carried on a gentle breeze we fly,
Into a time, a place for you & me -
we see our dreams realised.

A love to endure the darkest dawn,
A heart that will carry me home -
A place in time, no more alone.






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The Walrus at 21:04 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Mushy is a fair description, not lacking in purity. Avery direct piece written from unobstructed emotion. The sentiment is more than conveyed.

I salute you.

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Ling Ling at 12:28 on 21 November 2003  Report this post
Thank you Walrus, I suppose what I was wanting to convey is how you would expect to feel in the knowledge that you are where you are meant to be, and that you love and are loved without question, or hesitation. At the end of the day, we all want to be loved for who we are.
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The Walrus at 12:38 on 21 November 2003  Report this post
I can only agree Ling Ling.

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roovacrag at 12:55 on 21 November 2003  Report this post
Hope you find the man of your dreams ling ling. Well worth the wait. xx al
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