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Until today

by Stacey 

Posted: 19 November 2003
Word Count: 81
Summary: It's funny how falling in love turns you into a romantic fool. I know it may be simple, but this sums it up for me nicely. Thank you.
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I felt my heart smile
as you took my hand in yours
and kissed it
gently

I lost my breath
when you looked deep
so deep
in to my eyes
connecting with my soul

I traced your body
with my hands
then every inch
of your perfect face
storing it in my memory forever

I felt overwhelmed
by this emotion I was feeling
I cried
wept quietly in your arms
as I realised

I never knew what love was
until today.






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roovacrag at 13:02 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Great...... love is wonderful. Makes you write the best poetry. xx Alice
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The Walrus at 13:09 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Simple, direct and very powerful. Says it how it is.

Good stuff.

The Walrus
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poemsgalore at 18:37 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
So that's what it's all about. Thanks for a great poem.
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Stacey at 18:49 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Stace.
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Ellenna at 19:10 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Beautiful .. made my heart leap !

Ellie
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Elsie at 20:04 on 20 November 2003  Report this post
Made my nose go red..
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Ticonderoga at 19:34 on 23 November 2003  Report this post

Made my ------ tingle! Glorious; that's how it feels.

L & M,
Mike
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Ellenna at 19:37 on 23 November 2003  Report this post
Stacey you seem to have got all our bits doing things lol

Ellie :)
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Stacey at 18:47 on 25 November 2003  Report this post
Awwwww you guys make me blush! Thank you all for your lovely comments, very encouraging.
Best wishes,
Stace.
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