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Masterpiece in the making

by Bobo 

Posted: 17 November 2003
Word Count: 36

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Blank canvass -
paint on me,
give me your meaning.
Tell a story of endeavour,
or whatever
you desire.
Virant shades of primary,
about my psyche -
giving form,
to my underwhelming void.

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roovacrag at 20:54 on 18 November 2003  Report this post
Blank canvas can be covered in glory,
full of life and colour. I can see where your going. Hope you can.

Ticonderoga at 00:37 on 29 November 2003  Report this post

Like it a lot - but think 'underwhelming' too weak for what's gone before; also, I'm quite a logophile, but, what's 'virant'? Wonderfully visual/emotional', though.


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