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A new love

by roovacrag 

Posted: 14 November 2003
Word Count: 40
Summary: Can anyone find, love second time round.

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My heart was badly broken,
split in two.
Cast aside
as you do.

For years it was dormant,
not needed
not surprised.

Then you came along,
not sure it will mend
as of now
we will just stay friends.

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Ticonderoga at 22:16 on 16 November 2003  Report this post

Now, that is very beautiful, simple and honest; a lovely summation of a frame-of-heart. This really spoke to me. Been there. One tiny suggestion.........?

not needed
not used



roovacrag at 18:56 on 17 November 2003  Report this post
Thank you.When the one you love dies.
Your not needed anymore,not used anymore, no surprises.


Perhaps after all this time i will find love again. xx alice

Fearless at 17:07 on 19 November 2003  Report this post

The poem asks an interesting question. I think the answer is 'yes', but love is never the same twice, is it? It's important to remember that.


Richardwest at 12:31 on 22 November 2003  Report this post
Simple. Affecting. The sad eloquence of loss. The guarded hope of something -- purpose? certainties? -- regained if not now, then, well. . . One day.

Loved it.


TeeFoley at 22:45 on 05 March 2004  Report this post
Good words, can relate to them. Advice, if you think you have a new chance of happiness....bring down those barriers. xxx

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