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In need of re-filling

by Bobo 

Posted: 10 November 2003
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Full of promise,
rich with hope,
so many dreams to be played out.
Endless verve,
ceaseless vigour,
full of much to shout about.

But empty words
and empty pledges,
are deeper scratched upon my heart.
What went wrong?
Where did the dreams go?
Please, mercy, let me know -
I need to learn,
to change,
to grow.

To find my way back
to the start.






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Fearless at 15:15 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
BoBo

Out of the darkness
And into the light
Tread carefully
Fair maiden
Blink awhile
Do not despair
Many are those who care

Fearless
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Bobo at 15:18 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
Fearless -

The darkness,
though its own misery,
is safer than outside;
the light of others,
overpowering,
blinds my weak eyes.

B
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Fearless at 15:22 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
BoBo

The darkness
Is not always velvet
As for living there
Forget it

Better to be blinded
Dazzled
By colour and light
Surprised by texture
- An insight into life

Oh what it could be........

Papa Fearless
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Bobo at 15:35 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
Papa Fearless...

...it could be a whole lot worse methinx...
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roovacrag at 15:39 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
Bo bo the beginning has gone and the end is nigh. You can always start again.
Hard, but a fact. xx Al
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Fearless at 15:42 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
It can be better too kitten.
My dear chum Whisky Al has a point.

Papa x
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poemsgalore at 18:25 on 10 November 2003  Report this post
There is so much despair in the second part of this, but the first shows a chink of light shining through. Hang onto that and keep walking in that direction. Brilliant stuff Bobo.
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Bobo at 11:06 on 12 November 2003  Report this post
Kathleen - thank you for your kind words. I'm pleased that both the hope and hopelessness shone through the words.

BoBo x
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