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From the window of the plane

by joanie 

Posted: 29 August 2009
Word Count: 23
Summary: For findy's challenge in Flash Poetry - Turquoise
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I could step onto
this snowscape of summer cumuli,
crunch my footprints
towards the turquoise sky
shot through with peach

never looking back.








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V`yonne at 17:13 on 29 August 2009  Report this post
Ohhhh! Can I come too? Great!
Read the WriteWords interview with Oonah Joslin (V`yonne)
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Findy at 20:53 on 29 August 2009  Report this post
Oh this is lovely Joanie I loved these lines

towards the turquoise sky
shot through with peach


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FelixBenson at 11:33 on 30 August 2009  Report this post
A shared thought and fantasy...How gorgeous and inviting the sky can look from a plane window...And it does look like you could just jump in! Beautifully captured, Joanie!
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joanie at 13:15 on 30 August 2009  Report this post
Thanks, everyone!
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Nella at 19:52 on 30 August 2009  Report this post
Lovely, Joanie!
Love this description:
this snowscape of summer cumuli

Robin
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joanie at 20:14 on 30 August 2009  Report this post
Thanks, Robin!
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