The taming
by joanie
Posted: 26 June 2009 Word Count: 86 Summary: My 'Teeth' challenge on Flash Poetry. Not sure about this! |
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Version II
In the depths
of a bag on her
shoulder, carried
to the beach, the
park, the shopping
centre
lie
essentials:
wipes, water,
gum, glasses,
phone, photos,
tampons,
teeth
of the comb
which now will never
tame
her hair
her day
her life
Version I
In the depths
of a bag on her
shoulder, carried
to the beach, the
park, the shopping
centre
lie
essentials:
wipes, water,
gum, glasses,
phone, photos,
tampons,
teeth
of the comb
which will tame
her hair
her day
her life
In the depths
of a bag on her
shoulder, carried
to the beach, the
park, the shopping
centre
lie
essentials:
wipes, water,
gum, glasses,
phone, photos,
tampons,
teeth
of the comb
which now will never
tame
her hair
her day
her life
Version I
In the depths
of a bag on her
shoulder, carried
to the beach, the
park, the shopping
centre
lie
essentials:
wipes, water,
gum, glasses,
phone, photos,
tampons,
teeth
of the comb
which will tame
her hair
her day
her life
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