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Silent Rescue

by tusker 

Posted: 12 June 2009
Word Count: 230
Summary: For Jen's challenge


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Tossing his walking stick like a juggler, the Dapper Man laughed a silent laugh.

Leering, the Ring Master curled his black moustache, glowering down at a young woman he'd bound to the rail tracks.

Betty Boo wriggled in mute fear, her bow lips parting wide at the awful realisation of her painful destiny.

Then the Dapper Man doffed his hat and hurled his stick, hitting the Ring Master’s head with expert precision.

The scoundrel crumpled to the ground, and Betty Boo let out a soundless scream as the Ring Master squirmed in pain beside her.

Like magic, Dapper Man produced a knife and slashed at the bonds that had cruelly incapacitated his only true love.

Joyful, Betty Boo leapt up and into his arms while the Ring Master roared unheard roars of impotent fury behind them.

After the couple had demurely kissed and hugged, the Dapper Man, cocking his head to one side, pointed a finger due south in an inaudible but inviting question.

Betty Boo nodded and hand in hand, they both skipped off into a flickering, white spotted sunset.

In the distance, grainy smoke signalled the fast approach of the Deadwood Train. The Ring Master’s horrified gaze followed its lethal progress towards him.

Soon his body will be split in two, but in that taciturn, black and white world, no one will hear his final screams of agony.






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Prospero at 08:00 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
Ah, the old Silent Movies, sometimes when I am being deafened by the music and cringing from the inane dialogue I hanker for the simple days of the old two-reelers.

You have evoked the period very well, Jennifer, even down to the jerky motion of the images.

Thanks for the trip down memory lane.

Good stuff.

Best

John

tusker at 08:46 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
Thanks John.

It's been a bit of a struggle, this week, to come up with anything, but then Charlie Chaplin came to mind.

Jennifer


Prospero at 14:09 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
Chaplin was one of the great physical comedians of his day, along with Laurel and Hardy, Harold Lloyd and Buster Keaton. The next one I remember as truly outstanding is Norman Wisdom. Some of his routines were just inspired.

Best

John

GraemeR at 14:27 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
A fun little tale Jennifer - I did enjoy this one - brought back lots of childhood memories of watching the old silent classics on TV during the summer holidays.

tusker at 14:55 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
I was a Laurel and Hardy fan, John.

Jennifer



tusker at 14:56 on 12 June 2009  Report this post
Thanks Graeme. Glad it brought back memories.

Jennifer

Findy at 15:45 on 15 June 2009  Report this post
Lovely story Jennifer

tusker at 16:54 on 15 June 2009  Report this post
Thanks Findy.

Hope you give this week's a try.

Jennifer

Findy at 10:00 on 18 June 2009  Report this post
Hope to Jennifer, its been so hectic...trying my best.


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