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by greeneyes 

Posted: 07 November 2003
Word Count: 70

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I wish to be the sand beneath your feet
on a beautiful moonlit night

The idea within your mind
as you wrap yourself in thought

I long to be
the fresh air that you breathe
as you deeply inhale
the night's gentle breeze

I desire to immerse your aura
in the rivers that have existed
since the creation of time

So that even in death
your spirit shall always remain

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Fearless at 11:29 on 07 November 2003  Report this post

Gently moving. Reminds me of a discussion I had last night, about the immortal aspects of a mortal - spirit, soul.........transcending time, space and memory....

Write on.


Tuppence at 16:08 on 08 January 2005  Report this post

paul53 [for I am he] at 16:36 on 03 March 2005  Report this post
A very nice piece. Please upload some more.

di2 at 05:21 on 18 November 2005  Report this post
That was lovely.

little monkey at 22:13 on 03 January 2007  Report this post
Just spotted this in the random read and needed to say that i really enjoyed this.

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