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Tuesday Morning Poem

by James Graham 

Posted: 21 April 2009
Word Count: 206
Summary: Written about 20 years ago, when I still had to get up and go to work!


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Tuesday Morning Poem

The radio orchestra starts
on the flick of 7:06, a few bars into
an allegretto. Elbow climbs

the pillow, eyes unstick. Stand easy, trickle
long and somnolent, sigh. Sour mouth -
so cleanse with snowline water

and sweet brushed mint. Having no fur, begin
to do what Adam did. While ‘Mozart began
this work in Prague, in the early summer of (buzz)’,

make light, make fire. Take milk
from the domestic frost, and water
from the waterfall. Eat. Drink. Dismiss

the poor old dwelling that peered so briefly
into the dark, and shut its mouth. Pad off
into the measured day. But this day

silence! Neither voice nor bird! A milky mist
is wallowing in the streets! The pole, the shelter, and the little
picture of a bus have gone! One of the cloud-mountains

has conjured the town away! This is not Tuesday,
this day has no name. Turn then, and find the key;
turn back where such-a-day

the players all step out of the radio, and the last dancer
turns it off. They are my guests; they become
my hosts; they say they are going to rehearse

The Fantastic Toyshop, and ask me
to play a soldier, and I tell them yes.







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FelixBenson at 13:07 on 22 April 2009  Report this post
Hi James,

Thanks for posting this. It is a poem I have really enjoyed re-reading. The opening stanzas are really well (an so invetively constructed), the internal rhyme and the great use of enjambment to underline the early morning feeling and the way we extinguish that creature that rises

...Eat. Drink. Dismiss

the poor old dwelling that peered so briefly
into the dark, and shut its mouth..


fantastic images. Suggesting early man, which made me laugh.

...and then the haar. Hurrah! A brilliant image of it.

The pole, the shelter, and the little
picture of a bus have gone!


but the best thing is the final lines, I love the magic of it. The way the radio can come alive and takes over in this nether-world
this day has no name
, and transport you in.

This sounds silly to say, but it is just very ...erm...poetic.

Marvellous.


FelixBenson at 13:08 on 22 April 2009  Report this post
oops. Typo. Unlike my typing...The third sentence should say "The opening stanzas are really well written..."

freynolds at 13:17 on 22 April 2009  Report this post
Hi James,

This is so well orchestrated and well conducted (forgive the pun) that I wonder if I managed to find all the hinted clues in this.

I especially liked:
Having no fur, begin
to do what Adam did.

and
Turn then, and find the key;
turn back where such-a-day

the players all step out of the radio, and the last dancer
turns it off.


This certainly goes a long way towards illustrating being transported by music. It is elegant, witty and suggestive, an excellent composition where the title does not give the story away... all I can think of adding is perhaps, "Bravo" and "Encore".

Fabienne


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