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Where We Go Forward, Back, Forward, Back

by Jordan789 

Posted: 17 April 2009
Word Count: 473
Summary: for Prosp's challenge


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A crowd of sixty seven journalists, hand-picked by Eldridge Pahl’s publicist, filled the small conference room. When he came out, blue blazer crisp as his facial features, he raised a thick, masculine hand and he smiled like he was running for president. The cameras reflected off his forehead like gunfire from an impenetrable tank. Laney had already gone over the rules. The journalist’ that had been mailed a yellow pass were allowed to ask questions, in order of their number. They each had three minutes of Eldridge’s time.

“Mr. Pahl,” said a woman. “What precautions did your team put in place to assure your return trip?” Besides him, before the blue curtain backdrop, his wife stood with her hands clasped in front of her. She was his publicist. Eldridge flashed an endearing smile to her, then turned back to the crowd.

“Well, I do have a very strong desire to return to this time. I have two children.” They, six and eight years old, stood alongside his wife, one on each side. “We have thoroughly tested the machine. In fact, I have personally already travelled into the future.”

A series of gasps rose in the audience. “I was unaware that any testing had been done.”

Then Eldridge turned and looked behind a curtain. He said something which was inaudible to the audience. He said, “Is he ready?” He turned back to the crowd. “Ladies and gentleman, allow me to present to you. Me, from three weeks from now.”

A mirror distorts a reflection more than the image of the future Eldridge who walked out onto the stage, with a silver-hued endothermic space suit clinging to his Heisman trophy frame just like an astronaut’s. He shook hands with himself. And then, the crowd cheered; the image of the future man before them demanded sheer astonishment. The clapping and whistles took almost a full minute to settle.

The celebration subsided but the clamor did not; every journalist in the room had their hands and were shouting questions in a entwined mess of potential. What does it feel like? How long does it take? When did you leave? Is there a limit to how far you can travel? What does this mean for humans?

The man and his future self held their arms up in an identical fashion to try to quiet the room. When the room quieted they both looked over behind the stage and waved on the surprise. From behind the stage came another Eldridge Pahl, and then another, and another, and another, and another. In all, forty seven Eldridge Pahls came onto stage and lined up in rows, surrounding the podium. Their dress belonged to men in the beginning of time, and from the end of time. They had seen the world unravel, and they had seen it roll itself up again.








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jenzarina at 10:00 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
Very good! Very Phillip K Dick. Brilliant ending.

Typo: [quote]journalist’ {/quote]

The confidence of Edridge Pahl just oozes from the page. (Or screen)

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Oh, I'm not sure about the title, though. Doesn't seem to do the story.

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Ha ha just noticed that my qotation box didn't work. You get the idea, though.

Bunbry at 12:01 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
Hi Jordan, I think it's time we coined the phase 'Jordaneque'! This is very much is your style and has one of those trademark enigmatic endings that leave me wondering.

Just one nerdy question - I can understand that Phal from 3 weeks hence could exist, but where do the ones from history come from? Phal has only been alive for a few decades so who are the other 'selves'?

Nice idea though and good work.

Nick

Prospero at 19:53 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
Hi Jordan

A friend of mine has two Spirit Guides who are both her own previous personalities, so I had no problem at all with this concept.

I have observed previous selves and future selves spanning around five thousand years altogether, so I know that what you are suggesting is feasible. All that is required to experience this reality is to modify our view of the space time continuum in line with Einstein's fomulae.

Best

Prosp

Jordan789 at 20:16 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
Yes what prosp said. =)

Time travel, Bunbry. Time travel. There's an infinite number of instances in any given second. Don't think too hard about it. It's metaphysics.

V`yonne at 21:34 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
All that is required to experience this reality is to modify our view of the space time continuum in line with Einstein's fomulae.
Oh well, if that's all.

I enjoyed it but if you travel in time you can't be sure of being in a place and if you travel in space you can't shift the time, surely - or not - according to the uncertainty principle - maybe...

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That isn't a criticism by the way - it's just a sceptical observation. Prosp's challenge demanded that we step through time...

Jordan789 at 22:54 on 17 April 2009  Report this post
Well, obviously, oonah, someone in my story created a time machine that allows you to control both your ending location and the time you arrive. It was really a fantastic invention, and I give kudos to Mr. Pahl for all of his hard work and effort.

And I did have a character step through time. If you didn't go with him, that's not my fault. *shrug*

Cheers and thanks for reading!

Dreamer at 00:35 on 18 April 2009  Report this post
Hi Jordan,

Great story.
I know precisely what you mean about the time machine because I use one while researching my book which, coincidentally takes place exactly 250 years ago, so lately I have been spending a lot of time back there.

In the first sentence you could cut the 'he' out of
he smiled
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I am a little confused about the multiple Pahl's wearing garb from so many time periods. I could see almost an infinite number of them from his lifetime, but before that? I can see him visiting those periods but bringing a past self back from 1000 years ago?
I have not shifted my view of the space time continuum in line with Einstein's formula sufficiently to figure this out.

Brian.

tusker at 08:33 on 18 April 2009  Report this post
A good take on Prosps challenge, Jordan.

Personally, I wouldn't want to exist in the future, but wouldn't mind popping back to the past for an hour or two.

Jennifer

Prospero at 09:09 on 18 April 2009  Report this post
I can see him visiting those periods but bringing a past self back from 1000 years ago?


But that is precisely the point, Brian. According to Einstein all space and time exists simultaneously, therefore I can visit myself in the tenth century and we not only both exist, we are both, unquestionably, me. Equally, I have seen my future self at work in a Healing centre. All you need to do is adjust your thinking so that it can accomodate such concepts and not dismiss them as just imagination.

Best

John

Jordan789 at 21:05 on 19 April 2009  Report this post
Well, thanks again all for reading and commenting. I wanted to clarify my intentions with regards to the time travel, as this seems to have gone slightly astray from my original intentions.

Firstly, the logistics: If one man, Eldridge Pahl, for instance, builds a time machine and travels back to a time three days ago, then he exists in that past place as 2 people. Once the past man, and one man from the future. Now, after his rendevous, what if he jumps back into the time machine and goes back fifteen minutes? Then he will be in a time and place where 3 of him exist. Because he can travel forward or backwards in time, he visited all times in man's existance (every 500 years, let's say,) and after each time trip, he returned to that initial meeting with the journalists. Eldridge Pahl is bouncing around through time, but by the time the the initial time gets to that journalist meeting, all of Eldridge's selves will finally meet up and expose this to the world. So, case in point, Eldridge Pahl has done a ton of time travel. He only exists simultaneously because the inventions allows time to be an essential variable in his identity. Eldridge Pahl becomes definable by the time in which he exists: Eldridge at time T. Where T is an infinite number of instances, since Time is infinitely divisible.

Ya dig?

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that is not to say that Eldridge exists before he was born, because he didn't, not without the time machine. Then, when he did go back in time, then he existed at that time.


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