Login   Sign Up 



 

What is it with snow?

by joanie 

Posted: 07 February 2009
Word Count: 30
Summary: My SECOND attempt at the challenge in Flash Poetry


Font Size
 


Printable Version
Print Double spaced


When throwing things
at each other
becomes acceptable

when lying flat
on your back
is the best thing ever

when child-like thrill
engulfs the whole
population of the South East?






Favourite this work Favourite This Author


Comments by other Members



Nella at 17:01 on 07 February 2009  Report this post
Yes, snow does that to us, doesn't it?! 'Tis a funny thing. You point that out well, Joanie.

joanie at 17:46 on 07 February 2009  Report this post
Thanks, Robin.

V`yonne at 00:14 on 08 February 2009  Report this post
You can work on that I liked your first entry best but this has potential.

when lying flat
on your back
is the best thing ever


Think about the hot and cold of that! ;

tractor at 09:58 on 08 February 2009  Report this post
Hi Joanie,

liked this, but not as much as your first attempt.

Cheers

Mark


To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .