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Pointless Striving

by Bobo 

Posted: 02 November 2003
Word Count: 50

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Sisyphusian striving
renders me frail.
so threadbare,
jaundice pallor
sickly pale.

My rolling rock,
much too heavy,
pushes back
'gainst my girth.
Mocking me,
as I strain
against the earth.

to the nature
of my crime.
it seems,
can do no more
with its time.

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roovacrag at 18:31 on 02 November 2003  Report this post
Had to check the first word.
like it.xxxx Al

Bobo at 18:36 on 02 November 2003  Report this post
Cheers Al. Wasn't sure I'd spelt it right!

Lisa x

Fearless at 10:09 on 03 November 2003  Report this post

Sod humanity. Live, persist, astound and confound.


Bobo at 10:11 on 03 November 2003  Report this post
...don't know how.

Fearless at 10:16 on 03 November 2003  Report this post
Yes you do...perhaps you have forgotten temporarily.

radavies1uk at 17:49 on 05 May 2006  Report this post
Heya Bobo

this runs through really well :) Cheers. Good read :)

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