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Uneasy

by joanie

Posted: 20 December 2008
Word Count: 39
Summary: Flash Poetry Challenge Week 30

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You stood
alone under
the slightly early
Christmas Tree with gaudy lights
daring to give you confidence.

Something
rang a bell, yet
your staring eyes made
my mind decide to go home
quietly and have a cup of tea

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V`yonne at 20:43 on 20 December 2008 Report this post

A couple of typos, Joanie but this is a bit nightmare before Christmassy - I'm intrigued by that unease.

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Oh, you must be on hols now! Enjoy! :) and try to relax.

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joanie at 12:50 on 21 December 2008 Report this post

Thanks Oonah. Typos corrected, I hope! Too much wine last night!!

joanie

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V`yonne at 13:45 on 21 December 2008 Report this post

Too much wine

? Sorry, that phrase is meaningless ;