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A la recherche du temps perdu

by joanie 

Posted: 14 November 2008
Word Count: 110
Summary: A haibun for the Flash poetry challenge


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flavour profusion
tantalising my palate -
cut grass and raspberries

Swirling the deep redness in my glass, my thoughts turn to those early days of rough local wine, endless southern European sunshine, real friendships strengthened under canvas and starlit skies.

vin rouge et rosé
pastis avant le dîner -
digestif après

With advancing years comes a discernment and the assurance that the more one is able to pay, the better the wine. Aged in oak casks, with undertones of sweet vanilla and spice, this pleases my taste buds. I luxuriate in my superior knowledge and financial position.

vin supérieur
in cut glass splendour cries 'class'
while I weep for youth







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V`yonne at 00:23 on 15 November 2008  Report this post
Definitely! All the above, et l'adresse! Sante! Tow anciennes profs, eh? Only I didn't stay the course...

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Can't find my glasses... sorry for mistakes

DJC at 14:20 on 15 November 2008  Report this post
Joanie - I am now officially hungry. Have you read 'The Food of Love' by Anthony Capella I think you'd like it if you haven't...

D.

joanie at 20:04 on 15 November 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Darren. I've just ordered it - my daughter-in-law will love it too. I'm sure! I'm getting two! The reviews on Amazon are excellent!

joanie

Nella at 18:28 on 16 November 2008  Report this post
Excellent take on the challenge, Joanie.
A glass of wine sounds nice right now...
Robin

joanie at 22:06 on 16 November 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Robin! Much appreciated.

joanie

FelixBenson at 11:31 on 17 November 2008  Report this post
I love this Joanie - the fact that it is a really unusual form, and yet content that appeals to us all. The combination of those shorter poetic lines and the luxuriously long ones - like the finish f the gorgoeus wine on the palette. A really inventive take on the theme!
Kirsty

joanie at 11:36 on 17 November 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Kirsty. Glad you liked it.

joanie


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