Landing
by 
joanie
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Posted: 14 October 2008 Word Count: 42 Summary: For the Flash Poetry Challnege |
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Two nights
in a travelodge
with plastic mattress covers
where the
less than pristine sheet
wrinkles and clings with each turn
until
the bed's a war zone
with concrete pillows shrapnel-
filled. How
different was the dream
we had before our D-day.
in a travelodge
with plastic mattress covers
where the
less than pristine sheet
wrinkles and clings with each turn
until
the bed's a war zone
with concrete pillows shrapnel-
filled. How
different was the dream
we had before our D-day.
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V`yonne
Also a brilliant description of the bed being like a war zone and the pillow... I seem to spend most nights fighting the pillow - so I really connected with that. Very good take.
MarlaD
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