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senryu

by oskar 

Posted: 10 October 2008
Word Count: 37
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Senryu

October’s dawn
Sorrowful as a bedroom
Reeking of booze


Senryu

Dark hotel room
Lit up by blinking neon light
Paid sex and silence



Senryu

Echo of Terns’ shrieks
Empty row-boat in a fjord
Spooked is silence








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V`yonne at 09:45 on 10 October 2008  Report this post
I don't know the form that well to comment on it but I do like that second one very much.
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