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winter storm (tanka style)

by oskar 

Posted: 07 October 2008
Word Count: 72
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Winter Storm


North Atlantic winter,
shafts of sunlight race across
glass green mountains
deep fear inducing valleys,
in the mess, talk is subdued;

forecast is stormy.
New York is suddenly afar
but will we get there?
A bow down a watery vale
and not coming up again.

Smoke a cigarette,
she takes the sea like a duck.
Try getting some sleep
storm is always worst at night
daylight somehow calms the seas.







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Beanie Baby at 21:53 on 07 October 2008  Report this post
I love 'daylight somehow calms the seas' - it is very lyrical and somehow very reassuring.
Beanie


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