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by Bobo 

Posted: 27 October 2003
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What do you want from me?
How can I please?
Does my smile entice you to sin?
Does the warmth of my body
pressed hard against yours
make you long to devour my skin?

Can you resist this deep longing,
thwart temptation so deep
as denial marches heavy in your head?
How can I satisfy,
give you just what you need
when you attack me, so frightened,

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Fearless at 10:10 on 27 October 2003  Report this post

You long for just that subtle, fleeting taste, but you know you won't be able to stop there; makes you feel guilty, dirty, then scared and angry.

This is about chocolate isn't it?


Bobo at 10:18 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Spot on F! I can't resist a creamy chunk...!

spud at 11:08 on 27 October 2003  Report this post

And I thought I was then only one to have such a love/hate relationship with the stuff.

Brilliantly described, and loved the rhythm and rhyme scheme.

You've been pretty busy of late haven't you - how do you find the time?



roovacrag at 13:59 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Easy to to love and lose.To feel battered as well,
better to be alone with friends who love you for who you are not what they can get out of you. Take care bobo you have friends here who will listen and be your friend.xx

Bobo at 17:01 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Thanks so much guys...your words count for a lot.

B x

The Walrus at 21:47 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
One word. Rabbit.

The Walrus

Fearless at 21:52 on 27 October 2003  Report this post


Bobo at 10:08 on 28 October 2003  Report this post
Rabbit and vaseline, huh? What kind of people are you???!

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