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Textually speaking

by joanie 

Posted: 20 September 2008
Word Count: 104
Summary: For the Flash Poetry challenge. Not really a poem but I nearly missed the deadline!


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Hi Mum C u
b4 i go 2 town
got 2 c jack
2 c if hes comin 2
xx

Hi Jane. What time
are you going into town?
Do you need a lift or
will you go on the bus?
Let me know what you decide
to do. Love, Mum xx

3 no xx

Hi again, Jane. Is Jack
going too? Have you seen him
yet? Will you be home
for dinner or do you think
you might have something to eat
in town? Let me know. xx

not sure C u spk sn x

Hi Jane.
I think
I'll phone you xx









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V`yonne at 00:13 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Gud In nutshel EDP now!

Haadi at 07:31 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Wicked. Hah hahh haa! *falling off chair*

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Did that sound sarcastic?? Seriously this poem made laugh heaps.

joanie at 08:22 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Thanks, both of you!

joanie

joanie at 08:31 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Oops! Exceeded the line limit! Mine are usually too short.

joanie

tractor at 10:55 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Hi Joanie,

Excellent! The texting speaks so clearly of the way the different generations do and view things.

Cheers

Mark

V`yonne at 13:01 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Congrats on winning - well deserved. Lokk forwqard to your challenge

joanie at 16:21 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Mark. Yes, I have to include all the punctuation etc. in texts; I can't help it!

joanie

joanie at 16:22 on 21 September 2008  Report this post
Thanks Oonah. I've got my thinking cap on.

Nella at 11:28 on 29 September 2008  Report this post
Very clever, Joanie!

joanie at 14:27 on 29 September 2008  Report this post
Thanks for reading!

joanie


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