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Smelly man.

by roovacrag 

Posted: 24 October 2003
Word Count: 82


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Visitors come all are happy.
Voices jolly,people zappy.
Perfume smells all around.
Music loud all that sound.

One man comes near to me.
Not smelling of ecstasy.
Odour looming, he looks clean
Getting stronger as he gets near.

I move away but he gets closer.
What a plonker,what a poser.
Crinkle nose not smell right.
His odour is more than slight.

Boring man watches tele
dare i tell him he is smelly.
Better not, he's not worth it.
Dirty man,no not perfect.






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Fearless at 10:44 on 25 October 2003  Report this post
Al

Ol' smelly draws would probably argue that its his pheromones! Made me smile on this beautiful Saturday morning. Thanks.

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Colin-M at 16:54 on 18 February 2004  Report this post
I don't know if you're watching the latest reality programme on Channel 5 - er, Back To Reality I think. Well, Jade said something about Rick Waller being smelly and it made me think of this poem, made me smile.

Still trying to get through the rest.

Colin M


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