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tanka
Posted: 06 August 2008
Word Count: 24
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Tanka
Pity Bin Laded,
They couldn’t find him anywhere
Got his chauffeur though;
No more limos for BL
Hope he has got solid boots
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 Beanie Baby at 20:48 on 10 September 2008
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Hi Oskar. I take it you meant Bin Laden? I tought this was quite brave of you. Many poets tend to express their political views via their poetry and you have certainly caught a topic worthy of discussion here! As far as the layout is concerned, you have caught it well and you have stuck to the prerequisite 31 syllable which makes a tanka - albeit in a slightly rebellious way - 5, 8, 5, 6, 7 instead of the usual 5, 7, 5, 7, 7 - but that is exactly what makes this form of writing so exciting and challenging. I hope we'll be seeing more of your work.
Beanie
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