Flying to the Milky Way by joanie

WriteWords

Flying to the Milky Way

by joanie

Posted: 20 July 2008
Word Count: 43
Summary: For the Challenge in 'Flash'

Font Size

Printable Version
Print Double spaced

You draw me into
your ball of light
through diamond
clusters

Your outstretched
arms entice me
from my earth-bound
state

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling, You
watch my spinning flight
and wonder how a mere mortal
can fly

Favourite this work

Favourite This Author

Comments by other Members

Nella at 16:51 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

I loved this, Joanie. It';s really very beautiful.

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Wonderful!

Robin

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

joanie at 16:59 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

Gosh, Robin - that was quick! Thank you!

joanie

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

Nella at 17:27 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

Were we on-line at the same time?!

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

joanie at 17:32 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

Must have been!

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

V`yonne at 21:46 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

very nice joanie.lovely form.well expressed
LOVED

upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling,

OONAH AND SISTERS!

Read the WriteWords interview with Oonah Joslin (V`yonne)

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

joanie at 21:59 on 20 July 2008 Report this post

Thanks, Oonah. The photos are just fantastic. I chose my birthday, because I didn';t know where to start! Excellent challenge!

joanie

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

Inspiration at 15:40 on 04 August 2008 Report this post

Oh this is a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. It really comes across as if you have a real sense of wonder! Not suprising by that lovely photo you used to inspire you.

Well done,

XXXInniXXX

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

joanie at 02:27 on 09 August 2008 Report this post

Thanks Inni!

Like (0) Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .

Other work by joanie:

...view all work by joanie