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by charyzma 

Posted: 07 July 2008
Word Count: 140

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first night of war
someone rumbled and the earth sighed
he couldn't have been more peaceful
at that moment I think I died

first time brings pain
I waited in trench for a while
the worst thing is when against your will
someone's smile doesn't make sense

someone is smilling at you
honestly like rain
the enemy has brought reasons to you
the war is very plain

I'd love to meet someone
like in book with magic grain
but I'm scared when wearing uniform
all killers are the same

the war is oldest in the world
there won't be an aria at the end
be brave run with the sword
but be aware of what you can

other girls will soon join
they make dcisions very fast
expecting the arie at very point
for that reason the war will last

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vinny-one at 20:39 on 10 July 2008  Report this post
nice piece of work, i got it straight away and i think you used a great parallel to seperate the title, it works well as it can be hard to understand a subject with out any obvious references being written...

charyzma at 18:12 on 11 July 2008  Report this post
hi ,I' ve been thinking for long time about title. Few times I showed it without title and it didn' t work. People didn' t know what I mean. That' s why I agree with you it works with title only. Thank you for your comment.

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