KEEP BETWEEN THE LINES.
Posted: 26 June 2008 Word Count: 62 Summary: A comment on immigration, the fears, the aspiration
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Block capitals ONLY, writing in black ink, Blood of black children making us think Biometric cleansing, following the streets, Guns on the hip of bobbies on the beat,
Fear breeds foreiners flooding our shores, Foreigners just breed
Countersign, countersign, Keep between the lines. KEEP BETWEEN THE LINES. READ BETWEEN THE LINES.
I certify that this is a horrible likeness of (insert name).
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Bunbry at 22:55 on 26 June 2008
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Well here' s one to get us thinking, powerful stuff! I would change Bobbies to Police as there are too many syllables in Bobbies. And a personal thing - I don' t like to see lots of Caps in poetry as it' s not attractive to the eye.
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