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KEEP BETWEEN THE LINES.

by ThomasPGethin 

Posted: 26 June 2008
Word Count: 62
Summary: A comment on immigration, the fears, the aspiration


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Block capitals ONLY, writing in black ink,
Blood of black children making us think
Biometric cleansing, following the streets,
Guns on the hip of bobbies on the beat,

Fear breeds foreiners flooding our shores,
Foreigners just breed

Countersign, countersign,
Keep between the lines.
KEEP BETWEEN THE LINES.
READ BETWEEN THE LINES.

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Bunbry at 22:55 on 26 June 2008  Report this post
Well here' s one to get us thinking, powerful stuff! I would change Bobbies to Police as there are too many syllables in Bobbies. And a personal thing - I don' t like to see lots of Caps in poetry as it' s not attractive to the eye.


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