Infection (complete play) by wordman67

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Infection (complete play)

by wordman67

Posted: 25 June 2008
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Summary: Here's the complete script of a play whose first scene I posted a while back. An elderly germ-phobic millionaire and his young caretaker lead a bizarre reclusive life that is turned upside down by a young woman who is not all that she seems.

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Jubbly at 14:06 on 08 July 2008 Report this post

Ken, I promise I will read and comment in the next few days, I' ve been off line lately and a bit snowed under.

J

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Jubbly at 18:53 on 26 July 2008 Report this post

Hi Ken,so sorry I took so long to get to you. I found this compelling reading, and very filmic too. There's such a lot of wonderful mind games going on it's really a delight to try and work out who is telling the truth and who isn't. I would've liked to see a bit more of Amy at the beginning, maybe as a sort of symbol of what was to come, but just a thought. Also there is a moment when Fletcher tells Amy how lonely he is and for reason that jarred. I think it was just too telling, might be being really picky here but Henderson is obviously the lonely one and Fletcher is caught in a trap so it just didn't sit right. Again feel free to ignore. Is it a one act piece? What do you plan to do with it? I did really like it, it was very evocative and I do enjoy your style. The reader and hopefuly punter tends to get hooked very quickly then has to hold on tight for the rest of the ride. All the best with this Ken and do keep me posted.

J
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lefantovce at 19:33 on 11 November 2008 Report this post

Dear Ken

It needs a little bit of a re-write. I believe Jubbly's comment's are valid.

As a script it is tremendous and my production team would be interested in working with it. Would you contact me please.

you can contact me at lefantovce@hotmail.com

Hope to here from you soon

Lefantovce

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