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You lied

by roovacrag 

Posted: 19 October 2003
Word Count: 39

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You tell me you love me.
You said no lies.
You said you need me.
You said that you're mine.

How can i trust you.
I smell the perfume.
The scent of it lingers.
I know its not mine.

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Fearless at 17:03 on 19 October 2003  Report this post
Cut his balls off!



He'd find it pretty friggin' hard to cheat on another without balls, non?

Celt at 10:47 on 20 November 2004  Report this post
Hope this is not from personal experience Alice.
No lies...yes that's the ideal.
Well put Alice.

Take care,

roovacrag at 11:59 on 20 November 2004  Report this post
Celt .this was a poem, just that. Nothing was from experience.
Cannot for the life of me that triggered it off.
Forgot I wrote it.

Now the vision is coming back.
It is a friend and I must have felt raw at the time I wrote it.

A person. Which was why woz wrote his piece.
Someone we both know.

xx Alice

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